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Name: Tamiko, YamiTami
Title: The PowerPoint Ninja
Site: The Blackboard
LJ: YamiTami's LJ
dA: YamiTami's dA
FFN: I no longer update my Fanfiction.Net account because FFN started TRYING to annoy the users. All fics will be posted to my main site up there.
Title: The PowerPoint Ninja
Site: The Blackboard
LJ: YamiTami's LJ
dA: YamiTami's dA
FFN: I no longer update my Fanfiction.Net account because FFN started TRYING to annoy the users. All fics will be posted to my main site up there.
Posted on 2008-11-07 @ 6:35 PM
Journal Hazing
Some big things are changing in my life right now, and I'm kind of trying to clear out the old and bring in the new.
One of the big fandom related ones is Saturday; I'm getting the first part rewritten because I was not thinking clearly when I wrote it apparently >_>. As soon as that's betaed I'll get the changed chapters posted.
One of the big fandom related ones is Saturday; I'm getting the first part rewritten because I was not thinking clearly when I wrote it apparently >_>. As soon as that's betaed I'll get the changed chapters posted.
Sick of seme and uke roles? Tired of "yaoi cliches" being written the same horrible way every time? Want to see a couple of men who love and want each other rather than rape, rape, and more rape? Like good characterization rather than OOCness?
Welcome.
Welcome.
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Tamiko (or YamiTami)
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And thank you for the fav~ :3
SanShyr: Think, Justice. You're naked, you have a raging hard-on, and in a prosecutor's bed. WHAT WOULD MR. WRIGHT DO?!
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Posted on 2008-11-14 @ 7:33 AM
I deleted my submission because I wanted to rewrite it. But I replied to your comment and hope that you got it.
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Posted on 2008-08-21 @ 11:48 AM
I got it ^^. I realized I forgot the reason why.
The reason for my suggestion lies in consistency. Making sudden jumps in the tone or technical aspect of a story midway can be jarring to the reader, sort of shaking them out of the groove they were getting into.
Not that this is 100% bad; sometimes this is a handy tool. Say a normal person has snapped and is going on a killing spree, or you interject a couple paragraphs of vague dark ramblings into the normal day. Or as I previously said it can help separate different points of view in the story so the reader knows who's taking.
However, unless you're trying to unsettle your reader or show a dramatic change in a person, inconsistent behavior within a certain point of view (say Medic's) will be more like an unexpected roadbump throwing them off course. It's kind of like there being too many typos or misspellings in an otherwise great story; even though the scenery's good people will get out of the car if it gets too bumpy.
LITERATURE RAMBLES EVERYWHERE. Hope I helped ^^
The reason for my suggestion lies in consistency. Making sudden jumps in the tone or technical aspect of a story midway can be jarring to the reader, sort of shaking them out of the groove they were getting into.
Not that this is 100% bad; sometimes this is a handy tool. Say a normal person has snapped and is going on a killing spree, or you interject a couple paragraphs of vague dark ramblings into the normal day. Or as I previously said it can help separate different points of view in the story so the reader knows who's taking.
However, unless you're trying to unsettle your reader or show a dramatic change in a person, inconsistent behavior within a certain point of view (say Medic's) will be more like an unexpected roadbump throwing them off course. It's kind of like there being too many typos or misspellings in an otherwise great story; even though the scenery's good people will get out of the car if it gets too bumpy.
LITERATURE RAMBLES EVERYWHERE. Hope I helped ^^
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Posted on 2008-08-23 @ 5:07 AM
Oh goodness, thank you so much for all the
s!
And, um, I will totally have e-babies with you. Sounds like fun! 
~m
~m
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Posted on 2008-07-02 @ 6:58 PM
Just read the 8th chapter of Baptism, and I really ave to go and read the previous ones. I was so drawn in and intrigued! When I get the time, I think I'll look over your other stuff as well. You have a great style to your writing. Keep it up! ^_^
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Posted on 2008-06-27 @ 11:07 PM
Thanks for the
on
, hon!
~m
~m
Got an original character?
Bring his ass on over to Ask_a_Muse!
~
![mQ's Muses [club=6072]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/6072-1218647854.gif)
~
![MEMES! [club=5535]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/5535-1194324310.gif)
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![For the Love of Howl [club=5901]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/5901-1200067788.gif)
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Tired of always seeing the same boring y!gallery layout?
Use this tutorial to learn how to make your own!
Bring his ass on over to Ask_a_Muse!
~
![mQ's Muses [club=6072]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/6072-1218647854.gif)
![MEMES! [club=5535]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/5535-1194324310.gif)
![For the Love of Howl [club=5901]](http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/files/clubs/0/0/5901-1200067788.gif)
Tired of always seeing the same boring y!gallery layout?
Use this tutorial to learn how to make your own!
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Posted on 2008-05-02 @ 1:42 PM





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